Saturday, April 6, 2013

In My Imagination...

Imaginative writing is a pretty big section of the HSC Area of Study and, for those students undertaking Extension 1, it's 50% of their course work. Whether you teach juniors, Standard, Advanced or Extension 1, I've got a few ideas on how you can engage students in creative writing to develop their ideas into something great.

Piclits
Heard of this website? It has a whole heap of images to prompt creative writing ideas and students can drag and drop words into the image to brainstorm ideas. Alternatively, teachers can choose images and insert a single word that they want students to focus on. A great Web 2.0 tool for visual learners and lots of different ways it can be utilised in the classroom.

3 Minute Images
This was an inspired idea I took away from professional learning at the AIS. Put together a series of images to do with belonging, or whatever topic you so choose, in a powerpoint or keynote presentation- you'll need 20 or so images. You can source them yourself, or ask the students to each email you a picture with the website they got it from so you can ethically reference it. In class, tell the students they will have 3 minutes per image to start a creative writing piece. Each image should inspire a DIFFERENT and ORIGINAL idea. The beauty of this task is that they are writing continuously for the whole period in silence, completely focussed on the development of new ideas. The purpose of the task is for the students to consider many new ideas about belonging- some good and some bad. At least from what they come up with here, they may choose a few to actually write about later on.

Handy Hints
This document is a standard one that I give out to junior and senior writers to assist them with how a short story will differ from an epic novel. It illustrates the importance of starting very close to the complication and other ideas.

Writing Portfolio
This is one of my faves and I thank my colleague Andrew McHugh for giving me this idea! This is a great revision task for HSC students, to get them thinking about different text types, characters, audiences and settings. It requires them to have a 'bank' of ideas that they can mix and match and pull ideas from.

Teacher- Guided Writing
This activity will take the whole lesson, at my school, 55 mins. If your lessons are longer, I'd recommend spending an hour on this and then getting the students to move off and start putting the pieces together. Ask students to each bring in two images around the following guidelines:

Love not Lust
Faith not Religion
Trust not Obedience

These are just to avoid pictures of pets, girlfriends and boyfriends and other teenage nonsense really! But you can put your own guidelines on what you want them to bring in. It's important they arrive with a hard copy as these will be placed on the floor and students sitting in a circle around them. The students sit in silence as you guide them through with the following instructions, spaced out to allow them time to write:

  1. Each student should choose an image from the collection- one that is NOT theirs.
  2. First, consider the setting of your scene in the image. Where is it? WHEN is it? Students to have a clear understanding of the time and space that their story is going to be set in.
  3. Using descriptive language and imagery, write 2-3 sentences to describe the place and time. Play with sensory imagery: what does this place and time sound like? Smell like? Taste like? Feel like? Look like?
  4. Next, think about a character for your story. If there are people in the image, who is going to be your protagonist? If there is not a person, how can the setting shape a character for you?
  5. Consider the age, sex and back story of your protagonist. Write a character profile for them, about a paragraph. What do they look like? What is their occupation? Family situation? Marital status? Likes and dislikes? etc. 
  6. From here, it's important to get the students thinking about the plot. In the context of the AOS, it needs to link to Belonging so plant that seed in their heads at this point. Students should decide what is happening in the image right now and what happened just before this picture was taken. Here, you're trying to get them to decide upon a complication that hopefully has to do with belonging! 
  7. Now consider what happens just after this picture is taken. How does this progress the plot?
  8. Next, think about other people that are in the image. Who are they? How do they relate to your protagonist? What part do they play in the plot? If there are no others, why not? What does that suggest about the concept of belonging? I don't recommend students develop any more that 2 characters; when they do, the stories become bigger than Ben Hur. 
  9. Consider a symbol or motif that could recur through their piece. Is it something from the image- a necklace? Colour? Or is it a phrase that is repeated throughout? Write a paragraph on the symbol/ motif. Describe it's significance and purpose. Analyse it like you would if it were in your core text. How does the protagonist interact with it?
  10. Students put their image back into the centre and choose another one. How does this new image suggest a new direction for your story? From here, get the students to start writing if there is time, using all the prompts and brainstorming they have completed thus far.
In my classroom, I establish this task the lesson before and let them know that when they arrive they are to be completely silent and focussed. I reiterate this when they enter the room by putting my finger to my lips and speaking calmly and quietly when guiding them through. It's supposed to be a focussed and reflective activity where the answer to all their questions is YES, so really, there's no point in asking any. 

Hopefully some of these ideas will inspire those of you out there that are looking for new ways into creative and imaginative writing!














Thursday, April 4, 2013

Belonging Related Materials

This post is about 5 months later than anticipated- that's always the way right? The school year just floats away from us! Oh well. It will be useful for Year 12 teachers in preparation for trials and HSC revision, as well as teaching belonging at the end of the year.

It's always a challenge to get my students sourcing appropriate and sophisticated related texts at first; being girls, their brains immediately jump to all the cliches Disney, Finding Nemo, Mean Girls. So it's a good idea to have a really good bank of resources that you can present to your class as models of GOOD related texts.

I used to ask my students to create a 'logbook', which documents the collection of related texts and their writing on it. But these days, the whole 'book' thing seems pretty out of date to me, especially since we run a highly successful 1:1 laptop program. So these days, I proudly run a paperless classroom, preferring to upload word documents and PDFs onto our Moodle Intranet for students to type straight into and file away. "But what about their handwriting? The HSC is still hand written after all!" I hear you cry. I still ask them to hand write essays, class tasks, creative writing. It's about finding the balance between convenience and skill.

Attached here is the logbook task that I have often used for both Standard and Advanced. It's got a number of tips for successful sourcing of texts as well. I also ask students to fill out a template for each text that they find, to demonstrate their understanding of the aspects of belonging present in the text and to start analysing the forms and features of the text.

While I can't publish online works which are not my own, I can give you a pretty good list to run down as suggestions! So here are my failsafe belonging related texts, some which are really well-known, others which are a bit more obscure and good to model for students. That said, contact me directly and I am happy to send you out my copy of these resources, including film study guides.

Newspaper Articles:

SMH Good Weekend 2 of Us: a great source for both Standard and Advanced students and with one published each Saturday, they are always up to date and OFTEN feature a great story on belonging!

Television:

Australian Story: Check out the ABC website for a back catalogue of episodes. Great to teach film techniques and the documentary features. Perfect for Standard and Advanced and only go for 30 minutes! I highly recommend the following titles from the past- The Highway Man, Reality Bytes, Her Terror and Her Beauty.

Films:

Gran Torino
Juno
Aquaporko!
Into The Wild
Little Miss Sunshine

Poems:

A.D Hope: Australia
Jennifer Martinello: Emily Kngwarreye
Jennifer Strauss: Migrant Woman on a Melbourne Tram
Imtiaz Dharker: minority
Eva Johnson: Spirit belong Mother
Wondimu Mekonnen: A Refugee
Anne Sexton: Unknown Girl in a Maternity Ward

Short Stories:

Helen Garner- My Hard Heart
Helen Garner: The psychological effects of wearing stripes
Tim Winton: The water was deep and it went forever down
Tim Winton: Distant Lands
Thea Astley: Coming of Age